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First deployed throughout New York City’s subway and bus system in late 2014, the Metropolitan Transit Authority’s (MTA) Courtesy Counts placard campaign centers on subway etiquette. The colorful placards are illustrated with cartoon-like figures in various situations, ranging from the straightforward “Keep the Sound Down” to the slightly cheekier “Don’t Be A Pole Hog”.
Spreading the word
There is one instance, however, where the MTA parts company with the campaigns largely straightforward tone. This is the placard calls attention to the well-known subway misbehavior of “manspreading”. Whatever motivates this posture–a desire for comfort or a need to assert male privilege–the placard itself turned the campaign viral.
In fact, according to lexicographer Katherine Martin it may have even have helped popularize the word “manspreading”, despite the curious fact that the copy doesn’t use the word. Instead, it employs the more gender-ambiguous message of “Dude… Stop the Spread, Please”. The message is accompanied by a figure with legs spread in a manner annoyingly familiar to straphangers everywhere.
The popularity of this one placard, however, should not outshine the overall quality of the campaign–a campaign that trumps two previous MTA efforts to curb bad subway manners–the Subway Sun and Etti-Cat.
Crossing the line
These campaigns, mounted in the 1940s and 50s highlight some of the same poor behaviors as targeted in today’s “Courtesy Counts”, but they do so using entirely different tones of voice. The “Subway Sun” campaign favored the overly emotional – for example, one placard shows a rider blocking the door with his luggage as a mob of voices shouts “NO!”– whereas the Etti-Cat campaign frequently crossed the line into sarcastic, even derisive condemnation. In one poster, the campaign’s mascot, a black and white tuxedo cat, takes on the persona of a contrite graffiti artist:
“It was real wild scribbling over the subway walls & cars but, in objective and realistic retrospect & in full evaluation of the initial impact & the effect of the regretful consequences, it would seem that the entire action was motivated rather imprudently &, truthfully, in recalling the whole stupid mess, I feel real dopey about it, I’m sorry & I’ll never do it again.”
Discounting the fact that a demeaning tone of voice is probably not the best way to get buy-in from vandals (or anyone for that matter), the verbose, ampersand-riddled writing is impossible to assimilate at a glance.
Courtesy Counts avoids these mistakes. And while it may not have riders rolling in the aisle with laughter, it demonstrates that a campaign with a clean, direct, and slightly humorous tone can be right on track.